I think every one of us is guilty of ‘over writing’. Sometimes we just get into a zone where the creativity is flowing and we just CAN’T stop writing.
At times, an occasion will lend itself to lengthy copy; at other times something short, snappy and to the point is called for. The trick is learning when which one is appropriate.
Many people think that important subjects call for long-windedness. WRONG. Most sales copy requires short, succinct, compelling copy that will grab your reader, shake them by the collar and tell them precisely what they should do.
To be a great sales writer you must learn to be ruthless and cut your copy to the bone.
BUT, there are times when long copy is preferable. For example, in the field of direct marketing – believe it or not, people do actually read those long press ads that you see and those multi-page sales letters.
One famous example of long copy in press advertising was an ad for Merrill Lynch. It took up a whole page in the New York Times – seven columns, tiny type, no pictures and a total of 6,540 words! Guess what? It drew in 10,000 requests for a booklet mentioned towards the end of the ad.
The moral of the story is what matters the most is how interesting your copy is to the reader NOT its length.
Just remember if you are writing long copy plan, plan, plan. If you don’t you’ll bore your reader and lose them forever.
Sally Ormond
Freelance Copywriter
Helping SMEs cast off their marketing frustrations
Have You Read ‘My Sister’s Keeper’?
September 30, 2008 by briarcopywriting
A short while ago whilst having lunch with some ex-colleagues of mine, one of them asked whether I had read Jodi Picoult’s My Sister’s Keeper. Jodi was not an author I knew; I’d just finished the latest book I’d been reading so I stopped off at the nearest Borders before catching my train home.
If you haven’t read it then you must. Very rarely do I come across a book that I get totally engrossed in. From the beginning I found myself shouting at characters – I couldn’t believe what they were doing and saying.
Not to give too much away it is about a family with three children. One child is dying of cancer, no family member is a match and the only way to save her is for her parents to make the decision to have a baby that is a genetic match.
The story is told from many different perspectives throughout and provides a fascinating insight into the different mind-sets.
I shan’t give away the ending, but suffice to say I was in floods of tears as I read the final pages tonight sat in my car waiting for my son to finish rugby practice.
Go on, stop off at your local book shop tomorrow on your way home from work or go to Amazon now – you’ll love it and I would love to hear your thoughts about it.
But now I have nothing to read – any suggestions?
Happy reading.
Sally
Freelance Copywriter and avid reader
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